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Creative Ideas?

I have this story and I need a starter. So the Main character is Swatch Knil he is an Assassin (medival type third Crusade) part Jaquan (elf), part Vampire, and Part Ghost. He lives in a chain of islands called the Jaquan Islands. And North to him this the land of Wertir ( A desert) West to him is The Zarluen Isles. South is Mokes (Jungles) So he is about assassinate a great vampire leader so he dives of a building knocks him into the sea and not purposely drinks his blood when he gets out he finds he is a shape-shifter. The rest is yours. Well I was thinking at times he would shift between those races like at times he would become all vampire like others ghost

Public Comments

  1. Chuck Norris comes in and opens up a can
  2. I love writing and I'm pretty good at it, but I can't think of anything... sorry. I suggest making him just a Vampire Assassin. Not trying to offend, and I know it's a story, but you can't really be a ghost and a vampire at the same time. A ghost is a spirit, and a vampire is the living dead, only much more beautiful that the occasional zombie lol
  3. Maybe he should misuse his power as a shape-shifter.
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